Sample 1st 2 Paragraphs for the BSc. Degree in Real Estate, Indian Applicant

My central long term goal is to provide cost-effective housing where luxury meets affordability in my native India. My dream project would be the development of a mega integrated residential township with sustainable construction that is one with its environment. I want to learn how to build and market model communities that are distinguished for being healthy places to live as well as beautiful, futuristic initiatives powered by clean energy. I see your distinguished real estate program at XXXX University to be a leader in our field and I have the highest admiration for your curriculum. I seek the kind of rigorous immersion that you provide in the multi-disciplinary and multi-faceted world of real estate.

The strongest part of my application is my extensive experience in real estate in my native India, Bangalore. Now 41, I have been active in real estate for almost 20 years. From 2007 through 2010, I designed, built, and sold my own 10.5 acre villa project comprised of 70 exclusive villas ranging from 1500-2200 square feet. I was the first to introduce custom built Kerala style villas at affordable pricing in Bangalore. I am pleased to report that these villas are also now worth approximately 300% of the sale price in 2007. 

When writing your personal statement for a certificate or Masters Degree program in real estate, therefore, one good strategy is not to focus so much on your life story but, rather, to discuss what it is that you are very excited about learning, concrete, specific skills that will enable you to excel as a real estate professional.

It is very important that you review the style and presentation of your material before submitting it. Seeking the assistance of a professional writer is often a very good idea, especially if English is your second or third language. I would be happy to draft the first paragraph free of charge so that I have the opportunity to demonstrate to you how I can help in this regard. You will only need to pay for my services if you are very impressed with the first paragraph and decide to commission me to draft the entire statement.

I will provide you with a highly eloquent Statement that portrays you as someone with enormous potential to contribute to the advance of the real estate profession over the long term. After you fill out my Online Interview Form, I will ask you some specific questions by email if I need any further information. Please also send your resume/CV and or rough draft if you have one.

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I usually draft several Personal Statements of Purpose for advanced professional study in Real Estate each month and it is something that I have come to greatly enjoy. Real Estate is always especially exciting in an era of highly volatile markets where real it often serves as the major motor of development and economic recovery. I especially enjoy doing research on your behalf into real estate markets in your part of the world.

Real estate sales training has evolved from a rarely offered luxury to a necessity that new sales associates have grown to expect and the complexities of today’s market require. I have helped many applicants to MBA programs with a real estate focus, as well as drafting Personal Statements for Certificate Programs.

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Help with your Personal Statement of Purpose and Objectives for a Real Estate Training & Certification Program.

These training programs are generally based on concrete behavioral objectives, specific measurable behavior that the student is expected to perform at the end of the training session. Many companies set their training objectives in terms of what the instructor wants (instructor-oriented) or how much material to cover (content-oriented). Nevertheless in order to have an effective training program, the behavioral objectives must be in terms of what the student is to perform. Examples of real estate training behavioral objectives are: “At the end of this session the student will be able to…”

· Recognized sources of listings
· Demonstrate active listing skills
· Explain the sequential nature of selling
· Structure feature-benefit statements
· List the steps of marketing a listing
· Plan a strategy and procedure for an offer presentation.

A training objective must also be measurable within the training environment. If it can only be measured in actual field situations, then it becomes a management behavioral objective. A student may plan a strategy for an offer presentation, but once in an owner’s living room the objective changes to “Present the offer in accordance with the strategy.” This can only be measured by management. To take a concrete example, real estate financing is an area which a sales associate must know. When you ask yourself why this is important and then reduce it to what the sales associates have to do, it becomes an easier subject for them to learn.

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