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Sample Personal Statement for the BSN Degree, Ethiopian

Now 24, I feel as if I have been preparing to enter a BSN program ever since I immigrated to America from my native Ethiopia five years ago. I have been very much blessed in America and given the chance to not only to be the first member of my family to ever go to college, but to do so in the USA.

I have been preparing myself for your distinguished BSN Program at the University of XXXX in many ways and for many reasons. I see the greatest strengths of XXXX and the U of X to be our great respect for and admiration if diversity and progressive causes and I see this as particularly true in the case of health care in general and nursing in particular. My job at XXXX International Airport as a Meet and Assistant has helped me to become accomplished at caring for and helping with people of all ages, especially elderly people and those who are physically challenged, from all over the world, global cultures, languages, and customs. I have learned a great deal at the airport that I am confident will help me to excel in nursing school as we continue to make great strides in our celebration of diversity in nursing.

"The Rescuing Hug"

In the first week of life of this set of twins each were in their respective incubators, and one was not expected to live. A hospital nurse fought against hospital rules and placed the babies in one incubator. When they were placed together, the healthier of the two threw an arm over her sister in a endearing embrace. The smaller baby's heart rate stabilized and her temperature rose to normal.

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LC (Application for Master’s in Nursing, February 2011)

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K.S.  (Application for Family Nurse Practitioner Program, March 2011)

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I have been drafting statements on behalf of nurses now for 15 years. Writing statements is not always fun, and the older I get the more mental and emotional energy it takes for me to do a good job. This is one of the reasons why I have developed a priority focus on nurses, writing more statements in this area than any other, because I admire the dedication of nurses, their orientation of service and giving. Nurses are generally among the finest people on the planet, on human and emotional levels, because of their ethic of service. Thus, when I help a nurse succeed, I am inspired by her/his story.

I draft several eloquent and concise statements for admission to nursing school each week; and it is something that I have come to enjoy very much, take very seriously, and have gotten especially good at doing. In fact, I have spent many years investigating what makes a Statement for admission to nursing school as effective as possible, what programs and institutions in the area of nursing are looking for in applicants: specific qualities, interests, and characteristics--all of which we will emphasize in your essay. Character is especially critical and I will paint a truly eloquent portrait of who you are. It is all in the wording and I like to think I have a natural gift for statement expression. My own special strength is in the emotional eloquence of nursing. I admit that on a few occasions, tears have welled up in my eyes while drafting a statement for nursing school; it is a most enriching experience.

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